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Today, I want to look at this deck from Cloosiv, which they used to raise $6M in Seed funding. When looking at this deck, focus on how each slide works together to tell a strong narrative about the company. This isn’t a fragmented deck focused on data but a cohesive deck where each slide works together to tell a story.
It's a simple cover slide with a one-liner that is pretty intriguing. Given the familiarity most people will have with their market (coffee shops), this really works because 99% of readers will immediately see the value of what is being built.
Simple perspective framer that quickly communicated what they do and why.
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Strong market slide that is placed unusually early but fits perfectly into the story they are trying to tell.
Again we can see the focus on their narrative shining through here.
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Continuing to show the growth and potential of the company.
The entire deck is 22 slides. Click below the finish reading it..
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