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This is a great cover slide. The logo, name, strong one-liner and design are all here.
This is a great perspective framer. If you are aiming to disrupt an industry using a similar strategy to someone successful in another industry (especially if you are operating in an industry like freight that isn’t commonly known), then this is an excellent way of simplifying the industry and company by making it easy for investors to relate to something they are familiar with.
Great two-part perspective framer, this closes up what the previous slide started and hints at the economic upside. This is a perfect way to start a deck. Instantly, investors know the industry, the challenge, your strategy and the market potential. All from a strong perspective framer!
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This is a great problem slide that demonstrates the exact economic value you can provide your customers. When you are able to communicate value this clearly its easy for investors to understand why they should invest.
The solution here ties back into the perspective framer while explaining how it works. This again is a perfect solution slide that matches the problem slide and ties together the entire deck.
Adding traction here is smart. Once you promise massive disruption to an established industry, you must prove you can deliver. Adding your traction allows you to show that you have customers already adopting your solution and who see the benefits.
Overall, this deck shows how to nail the first 5-7 slides and really get investors interested.
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