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This cover slide is perfectly fine. Nothing great or poor about it.
This is a solid first problem slide that explains the big picture problem and why it matters to everyone.
This is a good second problem slide that niches down to a solvable problem that can help create a solution to the wider societal problem explained on the previous slide.
This doesn’t follow the normal structure of a solution slide, but it does work because both halves of the slides attempt to address the two problems identified. I wouldn’t recommend this as a standard format, but it works for this company.
This is not a solution slide, so the tile should change here. Otherwise, it's a perfectly fine product/explained slide. I would have just named it “how we do it…” that helps keep a narrative tone and follows naturally after the problem/solution.
Again, this is not a solution slide, but otherwise the content is fine and well placed.
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