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Today, we will look at a subscriber’s deck that was sent to me.
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I wish they had a one-liner here. It really is missed real-estate not to use the cover slide effectively.
This is a fine perspective framer. I also believe that this is something that builds trust with investors as they will often agree with this statement infact for many this could even be their entire investment thesis.
Continuing to build on a narrative that investors can buy into. This looks like a founder who has followed the “nod-along” strategy and is looking to give consecutive statements that build from a single agreed-upon point towards an argument for investing in their company. It’s a great strategy that should be easy to follow for most founders.
This slide turned the previous two (combined with this one) into an extended perspective framer. It also explicitly turns the deck into one pitching a vitamin and not a painkiller, but given the widespread support for AI adoption in the VC community, this works well.
This type of walkthrough with the “secret sauce” is powerful. It also functions as a wider product slide. It’s especially useful for VCs, who can likely see themselves using the product. Being able to walk through what that would look like helps them understand why this company will succeed.
An easy-to-understand use case where you can see the benefits and why someone would pay for the product given the time savings and value provided.
Another easy-to-understand use case helps to demonstrate the versatility. They also specifically target investors here.
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