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♞ Fintor Deck Breakdown
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Great cover slide that hits all the points it needs to!

Clear societal-level problem.

Clear specific problems in the industry that, if solved, would allow the larger societal-level problem to be fixed.

This isn’t as effective as they hoped it would be, largely because they are trying to overcomplicate it on purpose. For example, are they implying that with their service, we don’t need to think about the investment? If you are going to have a slide that demonstrates complexity, you need to do so in an authentic manner.

This is a very weird place to put your mission statement. It also adds nothing to the deck here.

This solution slide doesn’t effectively address all of the concerns brought up in the problem slide, which leaves it feeling incomplete. A

This is very unclear. It really doesn’t answer the question of why now?

Also, not a good product slide, very little information here.

This is a good explainer slide. The details are redacted, but the format is great.

Simple and effective.










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