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Today, we will look at a Seed deck from Glow Labs used to raise $4.1M.
A wasted opportunity to actually explain what the company does. After this slide I have no ideal what industry this business is in or what to expect on the next slide. Founder’s need to use each slide to set the stage for the next.
Having a first slide with no explanation of the company and then a second slide, which also doesn’t explain anything, really isn’t a good start. There is nothing wrong with having the team slide early but as an investor I don’t want to be guessing what the company does as I head to the 3rd slide.
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This is a solid problem slide that communicates a clear and easy-to-understand problem. I don’t love the design, these generic icons aren’t contributing anything but overall its a solid slide.
The solution slide clearly matches the problem slide which is great. It quickly and simply communicates what is wrong in the market and how this company will solve it.
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I don’t personally like market slides like this. I much rather they explain how they will get their first customers and how much revenue they can make from them than to give me generic information about a massive market and claim they can capture a percentage of that market.
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