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♞ Instamoji Deck Breakdown
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This is a good cover slide. It doesn’t need the additional information from the email and Angel List site, but otherwise, it’s all good.

This is a founder who knows that an investment will likely be made based on his background, so he highlights it early. This is a great strategy that I highly recommend.

This is nice and clear. I know it’s outdated, but the way the information was displayed is easy to understand, and the three issues they are tackling are made clear.

This is a great visualization so that you can “experience” the problem yourself.

This slide isn’t needed here. I personally would cut it. I don’t see what it adds.

This is a very solid slide that demonstrates how the site works and showcases the value proposition. It stands in contrast to the problems explained.

Great stat here to show the value.








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