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Today, we will look at a Seed deck from Kinspire used to raise $3.6M.
This is a great opening slide, with a nice one-liner and a great picture that evokes emotion. However, I’m not a massive fan of having the CEO's name and email on the opening slide; it doesn’t serve a purpose, and nobody is going to email you right now when reading this slide.
This is a great perspective, framer. “The need” is a good way of demonstrating that the perspective framer is about explaining the problem within the broader context of society. Even a specific problem in an industry impacts society as a whole, and investors need to understand that.
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If you have an emotional story that demonstrates why you care about solving the problem and your connection to the company, then it's worth sharing at the pre-seed/seed stage. Investors know startups are difficult, and they like knowing that you have a reason other than money to keep fighting.
This is a very clear problem slide with a nice design. When dealing with multi-sided markets it can be easy to confuse investors or fail to explain how everyone benefits from your products/services clearly. This design really makes it clear who is suffering and why.
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The solution slide mirrors the problem slide, which is always how it should be. This makes sure that you are directly addressing every problem highlighted. The change in colours from a red problem slide to a green solution slide is a minor thing that psychologically makes a significant difference.
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