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No one liner, and the image is very confusing. No idea what the company does,

This is a one-liner that should have been on the cover slide; it is not a perspective framer, but because they didn’t do the cover slide properly, they have also ended up messing up their perspective framer.

No need for a slide like this. Don’t do this.

This is a good high-level problem slide. I would recommend splitting this up over multiple slides. The mental health crisis is a huge issue. Mental health at work is a subset of that issue, and one they are seemingly trying to solve. Combining all of this into a single slide is a little overwhelming and makes it unclear what exactly they are trying to communicate here.

This is not a problem slide; it could be a perspective frame, or it could be part of explaining the value proposition, but this is definitely not the right place.

This again is not a problem slide; if anything, it sounds more like a solution slide. This is becoming increasingly problematic because they cannot establish a straightforward, basic problem-solution narrative.

Not needed.

This is a product slide, we still haven’t got a proper solution slide.

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